Friday, 12 December 2014

Draft video feedback

video link :https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vWwUJN_EJXM&list=UUzCuzU6TJVKZ_Khku1FndtQ

comments received:

Person 1

Shaky camera
actress looking towards camera and laughing
1.14 - blurry
bath scene is a good concept
the scene in the wood with the girl dancing is to fast for the song
more lip syncing.

Person 2

Dramatic/creative
Slow motion dosen't work
lip sync is way of - no performance
can hear bathtub noise
fuzzy
narrative unclear
interesting lighting in the forest/candles

Person 3 

good ideas, however narrative is sometimes lost
not much performance
lip sync is off by quite a lot
mixture of emotions such as crying + laughing at the same time (focus on just one)
shaky camera
fuzzy in some parts
slow motion is good but very jumpy

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