Draft video feedback

video link :https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vWwUJN_EJXM&list=UUzCuzU6TJVKZ_Khku1FndtQ

comments received:

Person 1

Shaky camera
actress looking towards camera and laughing
1.14 - blurry
bath scene is a good concept
the scene in the wood with the girl dancing is to fast for the song
more lip syncing.

Person 2

Dramatic/creative
Slow motion dosen't work
lip sync is way of - no performance
can hear bathtub noise
fuzzy
narrative unclear
interesting lighting in the forest/candles

Person 3 

good ideas, however narrative is sometimes lost
not much performance
lip sync is off by quite a lot
mixture of emotions such as crying + laughing at the same time (focus on just one)
shaky camera
fuzzy in some parts
slow motion is good but very jumpy

Filming and Photo shoot issues and its resolve

Due to my artist not being largely available to film the video and for the photo shoot as originally
intended, I had done the best I could  by spending time doing the filming and photo shoot and on the same day.

Health and safety considerations

Working with matches and extremely hot water for the brief bathroom scenes measures where taken  if burns where received whilst filming.

- I had prepared a sink full of cold water as a safety measure.

Outside filming in the forest, we had made sure we where relativity close  to edge of the forest so as not to get lost and had torches so we could see any potentially dangerous obstacles whilst making our way to filming locations.

- Maintaining close proximity to the forests edge.

- torches as to make obstacles didn't hinder filming in any way.  

Draft Music video :

There will numerous improvements to the the video for example better and more syncing. I hope you enjoy it

- Joe

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vWwUJN_EJXM&list=UUzCuzU6TJVKZ_Khku1FndtQ